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"Good story line ... good grammar "

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Love3

"I really enjoyed the book.so well written .I like the characters of the book mainly neera. Good work author and thanks to give such a work to read.it can be a bit detailed still I loved it"

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Action, Killings, and Love

"Action packed and fast paced. I loved every paragraph of this story."

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Love³

"O my Goodness! Loved this book. It kept me wanting to read more and it didn't drag on in boredom. Loved the characters; especially Neera, she was one bad ass woman. I was happy that she found love, as well. "

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Great

"Loved it brilliant "

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Awesome !

"Such a fantastic read! Love the story line and the twists! Easy to follow with POV. Great one! "

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I liked it 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👍🏽

"Your story was amazing and well written 👍🏽👏🏽💕i enjoyed it. "

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Love

"This is a real page-turner. The story twists and turns so you always need to find what is coming next. I wish it was longer. I would have liked to see how she developed her business do it was all legal and she was not under constant threat from competitors and law enforcement. But then how would she find personal release?"

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Love3

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it ❤ "

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Love 3

"Loved it!! Thank you. "

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Interesting 🧐 🧐

"Noah is the best like his momma I really like the story "

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❤️ Good read

"Fast pace, plenty of action, humor, and shows lots of family love. It's quick so if it was longer, it would have more details descriptions, and possibly action.. *Spoiler* if you haven't read don't read below.. My wish is that it showed the twins finding that love. And seeing how the new sibling adjusted, and handled the information about sisters and a crappy mother... Or even a chapter on finally showing Zack that secret sex dungeon lol "

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Loved it

"Just absolutely loved this! Awesome characters, lots of laughs, action and 🔥🔥 Now that is complete, I’m going to reread it uninterrupted 🥳 Thank you for another great read"

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Shame about the language

"This book has potential, the plot is pretty good but lacks depth. The English isn’t great, words are wrong, grammer is lacking and it needs some serious editing. The book does draw you in and the characters are great. You want to keep reading and there are plenty of twists, it’s just a shame about the language "

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Good

"Good story 😄"

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