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Interesting adventure

"The story is quite captivating and the author has taken us on an amazing adventure. The interaction between characters is on point, without giving anything away. I really liked the contrast between Jespar and Rain-born's personalities. I'm hoping for some terms used to be explained in the upcoming chapters. I do have a nagging suspicion that they both (Jespar and Rain-born) are on the same quest and I am interested in finding out what happens in the following chapters. You're doing a good job, keep it up❤️ "

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