What is your opinion?
Martian Love
"Good fanfiction. Could use a little more dialogue and details. There were also times where it was hard to tell where a paragraph began and where they eneded."
please
"keep writing in this story because there is so much left undone and i hope you have time for it in the future. its also well written i felt like these characters were real and not a product of imagination, keep writing youre clearly good at it."

