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Aion Ring

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Summary

In a time of great darkness, four heroes rose to the challenge and defeated the demon lord twenty years have passed since then and those heroes have disappeared forgotten into legend as many myths have. But this isn’t their story anymore….

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
23
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Rizal Tarbell

In the small village of Swordfall in the Kingdom of Daca, a young man who is nineteen years old wore a black shirt with a leather apron over it with the brown trousers he had black short hair, pale skin, and blue eyes. This young man’s name is Rizal Tarbell he is a blacksmith who inherited his father’s shop from his father who was a well-known blacksmith before his death The Great Blacksmith, Jura Tarbell. Rizal was at his furnace watching iron metal down into a molding he has for nails. Rizal then takes it out with giant metal tongs to an anvil. Rizal then starts pounding the nails till they were perfect and dumps them into an iron bucket of water. Rizal then thinks, “man I’ll be making nails my whole life when I was a kid dad was making swords and other weapons like nothing then again he was the best blacksmith in the world.” Rizal then goes and checks the storage room and sees he is out of Iron ingots. Rizal then says, “damn guess I have to make a trip to the mine again since I can’t hire a miner since I’m low on funds as it is.” Rizal then thinks, “dad back then had enough money to hire three of them wish I was lucky enough.” Rizal then grabs a pickaxe and a bag and says, “but sometimes dad when mining too he was never really happy with the ores the miner bring him any way he said the best metal is the one you feel that can make something great with.” Rizal then leaves his Blacksmith and flips the sign to close and starts to his way to the mines where he can mine ores.

Later that evening Rizal was walking home with a bag full of ores. Rizal then says, “ah great this should last me a while.” Rizal then starts his way home as he passes a local river when he spots what looks like a person in a suit of iron armor laying down face first on the beach as they just reach the shore. Rizal then says, “ah crap.” Rizal then goes to the knight and says, “Hey you alright.” Rizal then sees the person is still breathing. Rizal then says, “thank goodness still alive but I can’t I can tell this armor is from the Yalta empire and since this nation is at war with them I guess I have to help it what dad would have done.” Rizal then helps the knight up and tries to bring the knight to his home.

They enter the blacksmith shop and lay down the knight on a bed. Rizal then says, “now then let’s get that armor off.” Rizal then takes the Knight’s helmet off to reveal that the Knight was a woman who had black short messy hair and pale skin. Rizal then says, “a woman.” Rizal then removes the armor and place it on the floor. She was wearing black under armor clothing under it. Rizal then inspects the armor she was wearing. Rizal then says, “dark steel not bad it tough and durable I can tell she no grunt…” The Female Knight starts to wake up and her eyes were blue and sees Rizal in a blur. The Knight then says, “Commander.” Rizal looks and says, “oh you awake you okay.” The Knight then wipes her eyes and says, “oh sorry I thought you were someone elsewhere am I.” Rizal then says, “You in my blacksmith shop in a small village near the border called Swordfall.” The Knight then says, “you’re pretty young to own your own shop.” Rizal then says, “well I inherited from my father my name is Rizal Tarbell.” The Knight then says, “I see well Rizal I need to get going I have to get to the capital city something big is about to happen that could change the balance of this war.” Rizal then says, “what.”

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there too much Rizal says, Rizal does it feels like it every other word that is his name.

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alright thanks for the feedback guys

4 years

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