Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

lovelorn mermaid

"I love this story so far, the characters are amazing, and the story is written nicely. Theway the characters behave is sweet maya seems like the really gentle type and Caspian is more the type that is playful and slightly rough with a sweet kind of love that is only for the one he loves most. I think this stor is going great keep it up! I just wish the updates came more often."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Great story :)

"I’m loving it the story ❤️"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lovelorn

"Love it 👏🏽"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation