Inkitt
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King Michael

"Beautiful story love it "

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Loved it

"I just loved the book it's sooo good"

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Great story

"Lovely story ❤️ very heart warming "

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Love the story so far

"Really like the authors writing style and the story"

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Absolutely love it ❤️❤️❤️

"What a great story, I have loved every moment reading it. I do hope the author writes more to make this a series."

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Sweet

"She’s so cute and Michael too!!"

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Vampire

"Love with this story "

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Review

"I could not stop reading!!!! "

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King Micheal

"Really a fascinating read so far ! Did her her stepmom and witch sisters make everyone but her mate find her unattractive ? Is she unattractive ? Which would actually be cool⁉️ I want to know so definitely reading and not giving spoilers ! LOL 😂 ! ❤️and prayers"

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A nice one

"Liked it, it have a looot of misspellings but over all a good story "

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Fun to read

"I enjoyed this book. It felt like many parts of the plot could be developed or explain more. My main complaint was the frequent errors in spelling, grammar, etc."

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Avid reader

"Short book but it keeps your interest than it’s over. "

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Virgie's Take

"There were a lot of typographical errors that impeded full enjoyment. It was hard to believe that our girl was 19 years old. She acted about 13. Many people knew about his mate. So, why does he postpone her move to the castle? Hope everything works well for our fated mates."

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King Michael

"Beautiful story is of passionate love and devotion."

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Good

"What a Sweet love story 🥰"

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King Michael

"Good storyline and nice characters. I enjoyed reading the story. Often passages could be a bit more extensive. I get the feeling you're trying to tell the story too quickly. I'm not an English speaker and I don't speak it very well, but even I can see that the grammar in the story is bad and that's a shame. But that's probably partly due to the speed at which you want to write. Try to slow that down, think through a sentence several times, and when it's written, check it out. And keep an eye on the chronology! "

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