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XEN'TARZA

"This story was intriguing. The writer over exaggerates some things, and I thought it was over the top and then figured out that the writer was describing a new world with other languages and people. At that point, I forgot about the characterization and was mesmerized by the story. I loved the action and the strange words of language. It was a great story I kept wanting to read faster. Where is the rest of this universe? I am in. Bravo, this is the next Star trek. Series."

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