Chapter 1 Part 1
In a land far away, rules a King and Queen of Lion Town, their names were King Lightin Bright and Queen Leasha Bright, who ruled their kingdom with care and wisdom.
Their race was the lionkite race, brave and strong people, Who would usually stay in packs and mostly try to stack on food to feed their packed family.
But their town, gears and defensive walls were very downgraded, so the King and Queen decided to send their diggers to go collect soil and ores nearby their kingdom for better structures and better gears.
As they do so, King Lightin and Queen Leasha go to their chamber and talk about the future of their kingdom.
"I hope we'll be able to soon get the resources we need to bring a better future and safety for our Kingdom," says King Lightin in a worried tone.
"You worry too much, my love," says Queen Leasha, as she puts her hands on his cheeks, "We're in a good and safe land with many resources to provide for our kingdom. In due time, we will have a strong kingdom. You just need to relax and be patient.
"Yeah, I suppose you're right, dear," he says, as he puts his arms around her waist and gently puts his head on hers, "I just want our people, you and our expected children to be safe," as he puts one of his hands on his wife's pregnant tummy.
While she put her hand on his hand. "As long as we have the Lord by our side, everything will be ok, especially since I have you by my side."
"And I'll always will," he says. Then the two do a simple kiss to each other and next talk about what they'll need to
advance first, while they waited for their diggers to return.
I like the kind and loving relationship between the king and queen (and their names :) ). Just a few grammar things.... before "my love" and "dear" there should be commas. "As they DO so," "you'RE right", "especially SINCE I have", and "I always will". Also, expecting means to be pregnant, so the children aren't expecting; they're expected. excited to see what happens next!