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Love it

"Such a beautiful story, well done author"

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You are Mine

"I really enjoyed reading this story. There were plenty of details without going over board. I Loved the connection between the characters. Great job keep up the great writing. "

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Love it so far

"Love it so far"

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LOVE OF LIFE WITH HAPPINESS PARENTS

"I LOVE THIS BOOK EACH AND EVERY MOVEMENT I HAVE SPENT WAS A GREAT EXPERIENCE OF REDING U R BOOK I HAD PLEASURE, FELT BEST WORTHY TIME KNOWING ABOUT TRUE LOVE AND PARENTES RESPONSIBILITES OF CHILD TO TAKE CARE OF THEM MAKE THERE FUTURE BRIGHT WITH HAPPINESS, GOOD TIMES AND SHARING MEOMERIES MAKING THEM RESPONSIBLE WAS A GREAT IDEA CANT WAIT TO READ NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE UPDATE MAY GOD BLESS U WITH HAPPINESS LOVE SMILE. PLS UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER. WHAT A GREAT LOVELY THOUGTFULL INSPIRING WRITER YOU ARE LOVE U SO MUCH 🧡💝💗🌠💥❣️❣️❣️ pls update I want update pls"

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❤️❤️❤️

"Really enjoyed reading this story!! "

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You are mine

"Wow!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Buttercup

"Nice story but it could hav been more elaborate "

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You are mine

"That was great!!! It all worked out for the best❤️ Thank you ❤️"

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You are mine

"Short and sweet enjoyed the story. "

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Loved it!

"Great story. Love the plot and details. Good job."

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Great banter

"Love the banter and internal thoughts."

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You are mine

"Enjoyed reading this. First story I’ve read on Inkitt in a while. "

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Good book

"Good book. Small grammatical errors."

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You are mine

"I loved this little book. The story was straight to the point . Elliott was a douchebag, I can never understand the reasons for cheating. For a second there I thought she was about to listen to her mother and forgive the douchebag. Sometimes I think parents lower the bar when they should not. Am glad she stuck to her belief. Thank you for sharing. "

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Great read

"I'm surprised he is so soft with his woman now."

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You are mine

"Beautiful love story.....loved it soooo much....ty Author 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"

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Sweet cute

"All in all, a really nice story, it does have some grammar mistakes, but nothing that makes you unable to finish reading it."

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You are mine

"This is such a great novel dam I loved every bit a few grammatical errors but amazing def must read"

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You are mine

"I love this book thanks "

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Dlm

"Loved the story. Complete opposites meet and blossoms. LOVE is such a beautiful word and a beautiful thing. "

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