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Bold and breathtakingly beautiful

"I got so engrossed in the story that I didn't even get a chance to leave a review for the first book yet! This is a gripping tale from start to present and I am eager to see where it ends up! Beautiful writing, character building and the attention to detail is flawless!"

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Ugh

"I REALLY hate for this story to end !!! Such well written!!"

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Envious desire

"More More More please I absolutely love these books "

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Beautiful

"Simple... beautiful!!! "

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Fucking Cheater !!! 😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

"What the fuck Eric is going to lose his fiancé for being a dirty fucking cunt and a cheater."

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Envious Desire 💚💚

"Following the events that the author left off in book 1 we get a glimpse into Axel’s POV. We get to experience his pain, his broken heart and what he’s feeling. Not to mention the author gives us a glimpse into the other characters POV! I enjoyed reading the other characters side of things and I can’t wait for the author to progress the story more as she continues to write it. So far though I would give it a 100/100 if I could. 💚💚💚💚💚💚"

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Just WOW!

"I absolutely love thus author. Her first work (Dreadful Desire) was amazing and her second book (Envious Desire) is just as good so far. It's only 5 chapters and already there's so many questions and drama. I'm loving it and can't wait to see how everything unfolds. Great work Marie Terry! I'll never stop reading your work! "

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The Road So Far

"Right now we’re only at like chapter 5 so I know at some point I’ll have to come back & edit this BUT, so far I’m loving the storyline. It is a sequel & not a stand alone so definitely read Dreadful Desire first. The characters are well thought out & unique but honestly I’m really itching to find out wtf happened to our female mc. After you read Dreadful, definitely start on this book. Definitely worth the read."

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