Inkitt
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"Nice go please more"

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"Short and sweet"

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Wow

"I like this book and everything. I am hoping she is going to pick her best friend and not the alpha. This is a good book and it makes you think about different things because it will surprise you and everything "

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Rejected by my mate

"This was so good and funny! I loved it!"

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Finally!!! A rejected mate that is awesome and not sulking

"I really enjoyed this story. Perfect length, not overly dramatic like some others and happy ending. Loved it! More please!!"

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Rejected by my mate

"Wow that was such a nice story. I love how it ended so beautifully. She bravely moved on and the Alpha had to suffer. Nice ending."

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Three

"Liking the book. A little confusing at times but very enjoyable. An alpha sobbing on the floor is not believable "

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The rejected mate

"Really good reading "

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Rejected by my Mate

"Still wow read it the fourth time lol love it so much that upon starting reading can’t stop thank you Stephens HornyBitch"

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Rejected by my mate

"Love the story with all of the twists and turns it has. I'm ready to read another book by this author. "

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My rejected mate

"This is an awesome novel. Keep them coming as you have great talent. I love shirt stories "

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Rejected by my mate

"Very entertaining story. "

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Great Story

"Simple and nice plot, not heavy on drama"

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Rejected by my mate

"As a book in its entirety it was beautifully written. But, the grammar errors where somewhat frustrating. Nothing to crazy tho. You could totally get the writer concept. "

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Rejected by my mate

"I like the story, though there are some grammatical errors "

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Rejected by my mate

"Very goOD. story"

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Marvelous!

"This was a great short story. Storyline was awesome!"

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Rejected by my mate

"Absolutely loved the short story. Author has great skills. Again I'm glad it wasn't like all the other love sick rejected stories. I'm serious J really needs that mate already lol 😂"

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Team Justin

"Great/fast story "

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Book

"I really like this book "

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