What is your opinion?
Nice book
"Love reading this book..I would definitely recommend "
Interesting
"Interesting story..cnt wait for full version to be uploaded"
Amazing
"Its very detailed and very mysterious and i love it"
Destined ti be his
"This story is so interesting. I like it so far now.."
Destined to be His Gema and The Beast
"I already like the plot and can't wait for next chapters. I want Gema to meet 'The Beast' but I wonder what is his birth name? There's still a lot of mysteries waiting to be solved on the future updates. Story is good just need a bit work on grammars. I recommend this story for those who like reading stories from underrated authors. No story is perfect and has it's own imperfections:) Keep updating!=))"
Review
"The plot is captivating...easy to read ... "
Good!
"I think the plot is engaging. It gives me Beauty and the Beast vibes, but a little different and that movie is a classic for a reason (tale as old as time some may say lol) I think the characters are interesting, maybe a bit underdeveloped since the story is moving so quickly. I also think there is a lot of telling instead of showing in this book, so maybe letting us figure some things out rather than just telling us would be good. There are quite a few grammatical errors, but nothing a round or two of editing couldn't fix. The one main criticism I have for this story is that I likened it to Beauty and the Beast because it contains a lot of the engaging elements of that story... But the problematic ones as well. Personally, I don't like love stories where a woman has to "save" or "fix" a man from being violent and beastly. It just sets a bad precedent that leads to women staying with abusive men because they think their love can save them and that it's their job to do that ("thank you Disney" I say with utmost sarcasm). I just don't love the sentiment or plot device because what this man really needs is therapy. Say it with me sisters: You are not your boyfriend's/husband's therapist. If you're giving him therapy, charge him $200 an hour sis. I can kind of tell that this story might contain some physical or sexual abuse in the future (however it hasn't yet so I'll be optimistic) and I just can't get down with stories that have that in there as a redeemable quality y'know. I want to see the beast make some steps to change for himself and for her (coming to this conclusion on his own, not her forcing him to or anything like that because nothing is sexier than a man who chooses to go to therapy so his partner doesn't have to once they break up lol), not her having to convince him or be his salvation. I don't know, I just think as authors we have a duty to put out stories that spread good messages to our readers (esp since this type of book will have predominantly young female readers) about relationships and what love looks like. Queens, if he's acting like a beast, leave him, don't try to fix him. Overall though, I think this is a good start! Good luck and thanks for sharing!"
