What is your opinion?
excellent
"The story telling was beautiful as well as the grammar. Over all I enjoyed it all. Keep writing beautiful things."
For the author
"The flow of the event is very good"
wow
"i adore this story so much the event is being realized very nicely"
Med students in love
"So far i really enjoy the story and I like the characters keep writing good stories sending love and support <3"
Interesting Storytelling
"It felt like, in a way, the narrator was similar to Michael Peña's character from Ant-Man. You do need to re-edit though, maybe once you finish this story or as you go on writing that's up to you. I liked the last scene of third chapter, it was cute. Overall I think it's a nice plot and it would be interesting to see what happens next. Keep writing!!"
