Inkitt
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excellent

"The story telling was beautiful as well as the grammar. Over all I enjoyed it all. Keep writing beautiful things."

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For the author

"The flow of the event is very good"

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wow

"i adore this story so much the event is being realized very nicely"

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Med students in love

"So far i really enjoy the story and I like the characters keep writing good stories sending love and support <3"

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Interesting Storytelling

"It felt like, in a way, the narrator was similar to Michael Peña's character from Ant-Man. You do need to re-edit though, maybe once you finish this story or as you go on writing that's up to you. I liked the last scene of third chapter, it was cute. Overall I think it's a nice plot and it would be interesting to see what happens next. Keep writing!!"

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