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Good plot, lots of mistakes

"The plot is interesting. Ari is an idiot like her mother. Always making the worst choices. The ending is a weird choice. There are tons of mess ups in this book. Later chapters mixed in with earlier chapters then bounce back to the time frame it should be in. Wrong names used a ton where it can confuse you on what is going on until you figure out its the wrong name. "

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