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Love is really a beautiful thing 😫🥹😭

"Love the story❤️‍🩹 ....such a great writer 👏 "

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A Malice Heart

"The plot and story are truly captivating. The character of King Malice is a breath of fresh air, with his compelling backstory and the emotional turmoil he experiences due to his childhood events. It would be beneficial to include instances that allow us to emotionally connect with the character on a deeper level. Additionally, I personally prefer longer chapters, but that's just a personal preference. Your writing style and character descriptions are exceptionally evocative, almost like touching the very air around them. I particularly enjoyed the cover of the book, which perfectly complements the story. Overall, I find the book highly intriguing and believe it has the potential to become one of the best out there. However, the ending felt a bit rushed. It would have been even more satisfying if it were given more room to unfold. Thank you for creating such an enjoyable book. Cheers!"

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Not every ending is an happy ending. Highly recommend it

"Loved the book however heart breaking it was. I loved the love Drew managed to conjure up in Malice's heart. What he had was so pure that at that moment it didn't matter how uncaring he was to his kingdom or any other negativity he had. But in the end what needs to be done has to be done 💔"

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Highly recommend story!

"I love the plot, the characters, the chemistry, and all of it. I think this is the first story that I've read that has the male lead pov and I'm loving the mystery in it. Would recommend this to anyone especially for those picky readers. ❤️❤️❤️"

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good job

"That was a really good first few chapters like its one of the best on this platform. The plot is absolutely amazing and I love the characters I really do not have anything to say in criticism. to anyone reading this I strongly recommend this book :)"

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One of the best books I've read so far on here.

"LEt me just say that this book is amazing! The characters the author had built up with words are awesome and you can really relate with characters and see their thought process! Also the power dynamic between them is awesome and very entertaining. The pacing is great so not to slow that that you'll get bored and not so fast that you wont understand the timing of things. In conclusion, I would read if I found it in a bookstore!"

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Beautifully written

"I really enjoyed reading this book. There were very few grammatical errors. The wording was beautiful, the author really created the characters in my mind with their descriptive language. The plot was intriguing and I was hooked from the start, desperate to know how it ends. 8/10 really liked it ☺️ well done, author ❤️"

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What???

"It was just getting good, and it ends all of the sudden. It has a good plot, good characters and then bam, it’s over. Kinda disappointing for it to end the way it did, but not all books end well. The last few chapters were rushed, almost like it became too much to continue with more chapters. I do not recommend this book if you’re looking for a happy ending "

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