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Great!

"I just finnished the silver creek series and now this one. I love your writing style and how you describe situations and people! I can feel them, thats just great 😊✨️"

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Silent Runner

"Absolutely amazing. The emotions was so real. I could picture everything in my minds eye. Bullies are the worst and especially if their parents think they rule the world because of money. Getting sexually abused and it being thrown in tiur face by some petty self entitled brat deserved a broken nose. They were just great together. His egg donor was just as bad making his life more difficult. Glad everything turned out fine. "

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Silent Runner

"I loved the story. I couldn’t put the book down. However, the finished book needed to be proofread and spell checked. Way too many mistakes."

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Silent Runner

"This is a wonderful Story of Friendship turned into Love as two young people share a relationship that is Nurturing and Restorative as they move away from the past events of their lives. It’s a heart warming story that fills you with admiration and respect for how they move away from their pasts without letting it impact their present or view of the future. There is no help I could offer the make the Story better — It’s perfect just the way it is!!!! I Loved it!!!!"

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Silent Runner

"Heartwarming easy to read "

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This book is incredib

"this book is amazing! I love all the characters, how you were able to sprinkle in their backstory, without revealing too much all at once, you gave them enough, amazing, character traits, but also flaws, which makes me love the character even more! I’m so excited to keep reading this book, fantastic job! (≧∇≦)"

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Good work

"I love this I love it especially when boy gets girl"

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Love this

"I love how you wrote the 2 main characters, and how their bond forms over time. I'm kind of a sucker for this dynamic. It was so satisfying that they end up together in the end after everything they've been through! You did a good job writing the dialog and setting up the characters, too. Keep it up!"

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[email protected] it was a heart

"It was a heart warming story it was also heartbreaking . wonderfully wrote and exceptional I loved it very much and would read more from this author "

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Silent Runner

"amazing story!"

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I truly love this!

"Love the ending .. "

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Silent runner

"Such a beautiful story of true friendship and love🥹 two broken soles help each other to overcome their demons. So sad about their past, but so happy for their future 😍"

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Silent runner

"Excellent story...loved it very much...Ethan is a great caracter and it's so nice that him and Riley got their happy ending...ty Author 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"

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"Good story "

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Silent runner

"A short story. But valuable reading. Very well described characters. Read it to the end in one breath."

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Silent runner

"A short story. But valuable reading. Very well described characters. Read it to the end in one breath."

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Good read enjoying the storyline so far

"It’s a good read I enjoy the storyline a few grammatical errors but nobody’s perfect . Keep up the good work "

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I liked the story .

"The book was a nice easy read."

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Silent Runner

"The emotional love story of two abused teenagers suffering from PTSD. They meet on the athletics field and have an awareness of each other's pain. They find strength and support in each other. This is a beautifully written short story that will resonate with anyone who has experienced abuse. There are some spelling and grammar errors but in no way do they detract from the message that with communication, love, patience and empathy you will find the strength to live and love again. 🙏❤️🤩"

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