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V1 vs V2

"I’ve read the first version before reading this version and I find that all the chapters are more connected."

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Well written but not complete

"The storyline was interesting and I loved the writing style. My only complaint is that you listed the story as complete when not only is it not finished it is also abandoned. If you had been honest in the beginning I would have loved to read more you had written but now I feel I cannot trust the stories posted here."

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