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Moving at a fast pace!!

"A great quick Read short story , fun, exciting ,fast moving detail !"

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Hot quickie!

"Usually, when a story starts off immediately with sex, before any character development, I find those stories lacking in impact. This story was a wonderful exception. This story was a definite turn-on. Additionally, unlike many authors' stories, this one had excellent punctuation, spelling, and grammar. How refreshing."

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Great short story

"Very short but hot story"

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