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Bloody mary

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Summary

Hi I'm Mary....bloody mary .. I was a normal young girl until I got poisoned.... I live with my step mom since my real mom died. My dad left us for a "prettier " lady. My life is full of sadness.

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Complete
Chapters
12
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

New kid

I was holding Mrs Taylor's hands walking into class. I was used to seeing new kids and it was fine but this time its me as the new kid.... everyone was staring at me as if I were am alien with a broken face.

I was paired with the class bully he wasn't pleased by this. I just sat down opened my book and started writing. Whilst I was writing I kept feeling him kicking my foot under the table. This was not the best welcoming day for a girl like me. I stared into space for a few minutes until I saw my mom, mom.... she replies with my name but every time she said Mary she got louder and madder -"mary, Mary, MARY!"

"Huh?" I replied everyone was giggling I once I found out it wasn't my mom I started blushing it was Mrs Taylor asking me to awser a question "What is a ratio?" She asked again. I replied with the dumbest reply "uhm is it a rat?" I said randomly everyone was laughing again. The boy next to me called out " Corse not because the only rat around here is you " I heard giggling and whispering. I stayed quiet. "JAY!" Screamed Mrs Taylor " Say sorry right now "

"Why should I say sorry to a loser?" He shouted. He got into so much trouble. He cussed under his breath. Finally the bell rang. Break time. I got up grabbed my bag and raced out the door.
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