Inkitt
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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect on Discord: flemingmichelle28"

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When darkness falls

"I love the twist of thinking your normal to finding out you're special in so many ways. There is not any I can say I didn't like about it. I would recommend this book to my family and friends. I would love to finish reading it "

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When Darkness falls

"Excellent read so far !! The twists and turns are amazingly well executed !! Can't wait for the rest ! I used to live in Mississippi so the area is familiar. ❤️and ✝️🛐s for all "

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When darkness falls

"I wanted more of an ending. I wanted her to come back to earth. Very interesting reading material."

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When darkness falls

"Please continue this great story. We need more interaction, drama and intensity"

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When darkness falls

"More of this story please and see how it ends thanks good keep up the good work keep goin with the story please "

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What next

"So far so good - cane qair ti see what happens next"

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