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The Revel

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Sequel to The Ordinance in which the orbsters and initiates have seen their city submerged and now have to rely on underwater guise apparatus modifiers to survive in the new world.

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The Revel

This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents either are the product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual persons or events is coincidental. Copyright © 2022 by Jawann Fleet All rights reserved. No part of this book may be reproduced or used in any manner without the written permission of the copyright owner except for the use of quotations in a book review.


THE REVEL

(As was customary by nightfall most of the initiates had descended beachside for the revelries) .. the neighboring city was built upon a series of levers, hatches and fail safe proofs but these didn’t matter for the only hatch which ended up sustaining itself was the Atlantis Transition constituent .. their called ‘watchers’ .. stanchions or satellites and strategically posited near gates or toll-break insertions .. with series (usually 4-7) of adjoining substructures (mostly residential or commercial enterprises) called ‘pods’ connected to a main hub which was the axis/backbone of the service sector (merchandise, retail, restaurants) in this setup, the physical framework of the inlet. A unique kink of the filtration system being that in contrast to the city, obsidia’s aquatic environ allowed for steady pumps of the entheogen into the biosphere essentially converting the whole realm to the metaplane in intervals. And also finding that remaining initiates and orbsters had the ‘attribution’ .. attribute being: internal structure rewiring which fits, molds or morphs into a gul(l)(p)-like apparatus when the subject is in a state of non-transfiguration. However all participants weren’t as ecstatic about the trancelike stupor which constant exposure to the agent induced .. and opposing factions sometimes engaged in rudimentary (first-plane, non-transfigured) skirmishes within the burgeoning ‘polis. Matter fact as a further mean of disrupting the harmonic accord minions and serpents sometimes strolled through the aether-filled (sub)districts to actually target those unwitting fellows for bludgeons. After adjusting lenses tri-focal Xadwoa bypassed the retina scanner schema and entered the gate-lock en route to the mainland .. however it was an easy catch for the watchers who virtually shifted the plane and sent their standard gauntlet (‘usually a horde of raucous crows or ravens’) at the mate wherein upon apprehension for the infraction was issued a warning and fine .. eventually Emplex Sirvington had to expound upon the bandits recent exploits urging civilians to travel in packs and when non-transfigured (or/if not plane-shifting) to be highly vigilant. And like most of the other initiates Jon Carlos was also an attendant of the Revels festivities where when not engaged you could find him tinkering with the focal-optic lenses and learning of the vast potentialities of plane-shift paradigmatics and schema .. Jon admittedly wasn’t one of the first to notice, but timely enough though had he spotted through thermal-vizor imagery that night the first of many incoming vortexes sweeping in from the east. Zancent on the alterplane had propelled up three micro-satellites to sea hovering to view the incoming and had found much to his dismay on the sonar feedback about fourteen more mass swirls on the horizon over yonder. As more and more of the initiates began to take note of the swirls, mass hysteria undoubtedly begin to ensue .. for Richard Xaux most of it was a blur however, who alternated between consuming small bytes of the entheogen and rhythmically ’gliding’.

THE DWELLING: for imagine of it once the waters had stilled .. turquoise pods nested at sea-bottom. On the first-plane: circumstances at beachside had all but devolved, for beings not spinning in the gyre had thermal-vizors affixed onlooking with great fascination .. and probers had recalled Xoorna’s arduous trek, the 26.76-km stretch of descent he’d endured almost entirely on the first-plane, for the most part non-transfigured .. a result of the violent tide sweep propellant continuously catapulting the lad. Then you had Xang who like others resisted the metaplane out of direct and utter hostility though, not some averse biological reaction to the contents like some of the others. And due to the fact that bandits were on the lookout for new mates to join their ranks, they were always sending out ‘signals’ through the wave-y undercurrent .. heedful sentiments especially given to the initiates as they traversed through the hub since a simple excursion from even just pod to pod could put one of the youngsters in dangers way as the bandits ambushes became more calculated and they now liked to ensnare the fellow around an *Enjeres machination, gate-lock or array-toll .. (enter retina-scanner) with the lane leading towards the next city-section, still most of the lot remains cautious only continuing on in formation, if at all .. they’d transferred from thermal-springs to now like geysers .. hose-implements infused on the alterrealm. They’d identified a glowing boysenberry-hue strand of unearthed phytoplankton as having somewhat noxious properties. Apart merely from the engulfing being the murky underside .. and with night befallen the initiates (who’d survived the ordeal) recalled having to wait for the guardians and overseers to come from the ridges and hills beyond the cities reach to rescue them. Guajiro is mostly content utilizing the virtual-plane to stroll the axis as a ‘night-seeker/owl’ occupying the deepest recesses at twilight’s-peak, he sometimes shifts to the metaplane (usually a mosaic of dreams and nitemares in this guise-incarnation) but while intriguing to his senses he sometimes finds it too overstimulating to his conscience. Both sides of the sentry (satellite-guard post and bandits) understand the necessity of keeping some personnel solely non-transfigured on the first-plane because of the time-warp that occurs at other levels.

As based on most recent census findings

On the first-plane: an estimated 226 vessels (139 apparently non-transfigured at the time and point of tally)

On the second-plane: an estimated 127 avatars occupy the realm

On the metaplane: approximately 89 ‘soul-pods’ found roaming

tetraplaning: only five or six [in]distinct ‘essences’ or properties could be deemed to be traversing at such scales.

At the reefs where the entheogen is manufactured they had a permanently rotating arm of sentry-watchers dispatched and once processed and shipped an elaborate valve/chamber system which pumps the agent through the whole realm.

During the revel Zlevin and the clan had been nested around a campfire when the vortexes abruptly came in, and he like the others had at first noted the initial awe of onlooking participants, the initiates until some minutes later with the typhoon incoming when it had became a mad rush .. Zlevin and his band survived the ordeal via energy-consumption protocol enactments shifting rhythmically between planes and transfiguration-states for the bouts ordeal while awaiting the guardians arrival. Robert Yeoman like several others however eschewed the metaplane shift .. this

usually can probably be attributed to the fact that the plane can reflect the lighter or

darker sides of ones psyche or consciousness which for many of the serpents and

bandits roaming around might be leading to unpleasant flashbacks or mosaics in the

presence of repeated hauntings for instance.

- aylam's antennas provided biofeedback intel on the first plane .. transistors on the

virtual level and when pumped with the entheogen in adequate doses gave rise to a

slow stream cacophony of visions, epiphanies and mosaics for which he used as a

sort of internal compass/measuring tool.

- at the council as well their were fierce divides over the localization of the metaplane

and the regulation of the entheogen.

- activated valves at the reefs ; but see for what the dissent didn't know was that

regulators were always dispatched on a continuous basis to oversee the planes

distribution.. this strict licensing moreso than having any socioeconomic concerns

(or simply higher powers just pursuing their own alternative agendas and purposes)

was because despite the entheogen supplies vastness and realm-wide abundance (and able

even to be inorganically manufactured in certain special cases) is its undoubtedly finiteness.

OBSIDIA'S ASCENT (OR THE CITIES DESCENT)

- oh well that was due to a number of factors affecting the region

1. increased altitudes in oceanographic tides due to axis pivots plotting the realm

closer to the satellite

2. the councils suspension of the ordinance .. this due most likely to general fatigue

from the up(heaval)(keep) of the annual festivity by the multinationals

3. realmic-inclusive temperature increase

4. topographically most of the landmasses constructs pit them below sea level ( this

on all planes though notedly becomes more pronounced on the virtual realm and the

metacircuit actually which favors the object fluidity and spatial-temporal chasm as a

result)

ANTEDILUVIAN

- in the primitive aquatic realm antenna usage had seemingly supplanted the prior

implemented reliance on (tele)quionic input .. such a designation drastically reduced

the necessity of wires and cables .. electromagnetism and generators which bandits

had previously liked to threaten to strike anyway.

- it wasn’t the first and probably wouldn’t be the last when dan mindel got

reprimanded by the gears sect command once again for drifting off on one of his

solitary expeditions throughout the obsidian underworld in these increasingly

perilous times .. this even for the banditry themselves ..


- the council, the municipalities and the multinationals had supposedly already

considered the ramifications .. and had planned for the ordinance to coincide with

their realm-wide implementation of the atlantis transition.

- in this guise the Atlantis Transition was a realm-wide mobilization of industry and

resources .. an interstellar harvesting of the vast Oceania for the orbsters prolonging.

- the task force implemented by way of the seaforce-bureau was assigned not only

to the bandits terrorizing the substructures but also now to monitor ‘irregularities’

occurring at the reefs purportedly.

- a steady stream of the entheogen kept pumping in .. many of the shanty inhabitants

and the substrates had already developed a dependency upon the component.

- this shifted the industrial tenor .. with many of the multinationals now having to

swiftly delve back from colossal structuring enterprises to their previously adopted

manufacturing processing plants and pharmaceuticals .. albeit for completely

different means.

- apparatuses .. assemblers of trinkets proponents of parcel© operators on both

sides were now manufacturing and transporting all sorts of miscellany from the reefs

towards the main hub.

THE BRUTE

- oh yeah and of course lexy petersberg had to be considered, was running a nice

little enterprise with a group of residents nearest the hubs inpost .. making a nice

little exchange between imported goods past retinal scanners and offering extra

doses of the entheogen for noted seekers.

- most of the time when the lads weren’t looking for minor gigs across the tract for

their respective clans or dueling against bandits near gates .. they were watching the

feeds .. looking for bytes and bits of data specifically related to what was going on in

other regions and spheres.

- they had personnel monitoring the ecosystems primarily for this purpose ..

watching for the emergence of pods in other sectors, regions and spheres.

- still as it stands they were able to ensure the topographical remnants of the

previous worlds incarnation intact with it five distinct spheres of landmass then split

into smaller regions, entities, structures and substructures.

- at plane one: usually they'll just throw a SWAT-team equivalent at the suspected

perpetrator

- at the virtual-realm: the standard bearer usually consist of a cackling cacophony of

ravenous crows

- the metaplane: religious avatars

- picture of it a polychromatic motley of swirling pods competing for resources in a

29.29-km sea-mass.

- mulberry algae spores looked intoxicating to Xanith .. prompted him to ingest a few

grams which didn't propel him to a dream state or mosaic but rather a few incarnates

of sound rest .. and that was enough.

- a jet-black hourglass and crimson-red vial predicated their headquarter branch

offshoot.

- Reyarn was a leading member of the amnesty coalition urging the banditry to

relinquish all hazardous materials back to The State.

- noted oceanographer xole esterquire plugged in sentiments obtained from the latest probe detail noted pH levels slightly increasing along the gauge nearly realm-

wide.


picture of it not exactly a 'missile' though but rather think of it as a continuously bio-

degrading capsule ..


- soot-black pods were nested in the geyser.

- .. a convoy had been sent to survey the cities sunken wreckage ..

- a simplified ecosystem for the bundle of pods nested in the midnight-blue ingress.

- bandits terroristic infractions relied on threatening to use geysers against

noteworthy residential and commercial properties if demands weren’t met.

- fogged terrains .. terms such as karma, luck, fate & redemption.

- the first as ‘Neptune’s Inferno’ the second plane as a ‘cyber-purgatory’ and the

metacircuit as the ‘sea of souls.’

- poseidon’s-aurora (or aurals) is a spatial-phenomena referring to specific regions

where at any point and time three or more entities are found to be tetraplaning

- ziles mosaic imagined the first-planar as a brutal cesspool of sable-black sharks in

contention with/against similarly brazen orca whales scouring the recesses.

- ‘strolling around the spheres as a leviathan-like presence.

OUT OF WHACK

- how they actually preferred nonlinearity .. the stochastic.

- noted how ghastly orcas were currently terrorizing the eastern-front.

THE SHAMAN

- for ixel it consisted of consuming a number of psycho-infused algae and then going

where his sensors led him.

- the atlantis transition was a major logistical/geoengineering project which came as

a result of oceanographers probes speculating that the previous ordinance could

sink the city.

- sentries in the mainland were getting partially overwhelmed due to shimmering

plated orcas, sharks and serpents transporting into the realm via canals.

- mikex zorlen and a few other rubyian-bandits giggled with glee at the prospect and

sightings of phosphorescent octopuses, dolphins and porpoises amassed at the

outer rings and shells.

- videographic feedback from the scanner showed a trio of gold-plated orcas

navigating the western spheres.

BRIDGE-MAKERS

- .. in addition to parcel© operators and couriers .. new listings and advisories

popped up infrequently for canal and ‘bridge-makers’.

LUNAR DISRUPTION

- for what they won’t say is that the transition almost failed anyway .. of course

maintaining physical structures would have been a mostly hopeless endeavor .. but

then consider that even losing the alterrealm or the metacircuit would have been an

almost insurmountable loss of (digital/spiritual) consciousness which would have

inevitably propelled the orbsters into another perpetual dark age.

- one of the rogues had told cantatonia that ‘he was living in a dreamworld.’

- an ascending moonlight-white octopus drifts upward from the reef.

- 2.012-meter shark with glimmering though eerie light-grey optics for the sentry

posit.


- beaming dolphin span 7.8 revolutions in one flip.

- nanobots had picked upon (in the alterrealm) spawn offshoots protruding from the

recesses into the mainland.

- sea-blue spawn necessary on the virtual plane and the metacircuit as sort of

pseudocouriers of items otherwise non-transmittable.


- 2.103-meter shark flowing off the frigid west-end coast bearing noted shimmered-

black insignia .. an allusion to the predators expeditions along the coastline(s) and their terrifying success-rates.

- the spawns offshoot from one central kraken inward.

- consider the array schema as a incorporeal-chemical module .. a set of

interconnected tubulars pumped with the entheogen through valves and designed to

dis(tinguish)(cern) between the inherent nature of various incoming pods into the

prism.

- at this time the deviants we’re having a sort of ‘congregation’ in attempts at

figuring out which site exactly to target with the geyser apparatus underpinning.


- amid tensions rising between inter-forces deviants had began setting up micro-

dueling platforms in the outskirts.


- symposium at the reef centered around easing the deviants transition into obsidia’s

mainland.

- the stage directly succeeding the ordinance but preceding obsidia saw the emerald

city almost completely engulfed .. and only a very select few orbsters were still

languished above (and almost no initiates as those whose upper clans and sects

hadn’t saved or converted them most likely perished) .. xamara weaving was one of

the last two initiates from the revel to be converted .. she was already proclaimed as

the top dueler from the beachside bouts (this in terms of being the top-earner and

her uniquely destructive blitzkrieg bi-planar implementation of angling) .. so it didn’t

come as much of a surprise when noted overlords [waldon lugisla] and [zamar

lorenstein] waded through the vortex’ed rippleage to find to their surprise a slightly

ruffled and fatigued 1.774-meter albatross with vermillion lids hovering barely

over the rising sea mass.

- a series of misfires .. sonar went haywire turning the feed into a constant fuzz ..

transistor signals redirect so that feedback into the receiver is constant static.

- zarsgard’s mosaic had occurred a few incarnates prior to the revel actually .. on a

rather routine day amidst the cerulean-blue expanse that morning when he’d caught

the sighting of the two gliding ducks .. exclaiming in their own distinctive quacks .. an

alien language to him and one he usually wouldn’t be able to signify or decipher .. but

it all made sense to him that particular instance .. it being exclamations from the

hovering flocks .. affirmations of harmonic accord .. two organic sentient beings risen

above the despair, turmoil and constant revolutions of the city laid beneath their feet.

- naxul’s-haunting: the boysenberries contents can be synthesized the compounds

of the substance can be replicated

- the metacircuit schema-prism is very effective at weeding out specters and

wraithlike in-combatants for instance

- rising smoke bubbles emanate from the rubble which was formerly a hut before the

geyser’s activation

- and this is the truth as the sentries know for they look outward .. that however bleak circumstances might be in the mainland .. their is nothingness along the

surrounding straits and outskirts.

- or picture nautilus solitarily strolling the farplane.

- milex clivens lightly-scaled jet-black and in the serpent-guise trekked some 15.45-

km from the reefs to the kraken (who was posited even more on the outskirts than

the reefs even or the micro-manufacturing plants) to note much to his demise and

disappointment the sighting of a mostly dormant beast nestled deep within an

ingress.

- a sea of souls trudging around aimlessly .. zombies patrolling the farplanes.'

- reflected the krakens process of dispatching the pods out to the reefs .. whereby

arming the simpletons with automatons morphs the otherwise skeletal strands into

robust beings .. entities who then make their way into the nautic city.

- intricate valve constructs ; constant gauge measuring the acidity ; continental

dilution and distillation measures to combat the threats of hazard.

- from the heavens: relix mcister compared the revel catastrophe to the ‘opening of

floodgates’ and ‘an incoming’ .. the outpouring and subsequent acceptance of a vast

number of adolescent souls.

- 'like fate or intuition ..’

- marble-black shelled centipedes floating out near the kraken ; possibly a spawn or

offshoot as well.

- bringers of an anarchy in a sense .. bridge-destroyers.

- cannabalistic orcas.

- 'they would flouridize the supply.’

- the sea bureau governs over the (micro-processing) water sanitation & treatment

plants located some offshore from the reefs.

- a volatile increase in acidity rendering the neighboring regions inhabitable.

- counter-swarms dispatched to repel the krakens release.

- a new anatomical guise for the winged-stingers .. parasitic, but injectors rather

than ‘blood-suckers’ like their peers.

- and how would they be able to reconcile the lost of the metarealm?

- it’d be free-reign .. anarchic controls free roam for the creatures . A disintegration

of fronts.

- ‘a loss of mythos.’

- 'not just lawlessness but godlessness.'

BLACK SEA

- free-reign for the orcas over now uncontested waters.

- curvaceous mermaids [like lejuele]. various sea-creatures. octopus. multi-

phytoplankton. algae and seaweed. illusions and myth. reality and perception. the

omnivident.


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