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Great so far

"Really e noting this - wish the next chapters came out more quickly"

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Need part 2

"I read all chapters and did not want the story to end!"

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J'ai adoré

"Lu jusqu'au chaptire 44 sur Galatea. Très bonne et belle histoire ou chacun des protagonistes se débat avec ses propres problèmes mais finissent par se retrouver! Dommage qu'il n'y ai pas la suite ou un épilogue de dispo!❤️❤️❤️👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾"

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Short and sweet

"Short and sweet "

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Longer!

"Was shocked that it ended! "

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Beautiful! 😍

"Short and sweet and so captivating! I like how candid and humorous the support characters are.. they behave exactly the way besties would! Beautifully written, thank you writer!"

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Sweet sugar kisses

"Such a sweet story. Well done. Excellent."

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Captivating

"After so long this story kept me interigued.... Enjoyed reading it"

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SweetSugarKisses

"Good plot. Funny actually in some parts. Need an epilogue! Thank you for sharing! ❤️❤️❤️"

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Sweet sugar kisses

"Kept me intrigued ,I was so glued to this story and couldn't wait for the updates.❤️💕"

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Kept me interested

"Great read, interesting and engaging "

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Sweet sugar kisses

"Great book... Loved it.... All the love💕💕💕💕"

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Sweet sugar kisses

"I just loved this story, but I need to know if they marry, and the baby girl..... Need to know if she takes her on as her own. I need more..... 👍"

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Sweet sugar kisses

"The story is sweet and nice! I hope to read more exciting chapters"

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Very much

"Every thing Every thing Every thing Every thing Every thing Every thing Every thing Every thing "

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Sugar

"Can't put this read down its so good. Don't want to finish "

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My review

"I loved that the main girl was black, I love when the main couple is bi racial. I also loved the element of there being twins. I really loved this story, thank you "

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Beautiful love

"Beautiful book lovely sad story .love it."

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sugar inthe office

"i love the fighting and fucking part. i love how you explain each and every detail "

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Amazing

"It’s amazing it’s what’s some people really go through and you always need to honest with each other and mahlia and sugar really like each other"

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