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Pool part

"Great srory"

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Great book

"Great read...I got to get back to reading... "

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Nice

"Fun story that was really well written. Not even a fantasy I'm usually into but it was hot. I really like the emphasis on continued and enthusiastic consent from all parties. I feel too often this is ignored or overlooked."

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The pool party

"Very good book I hate the ending but who wouldn't it's an amazing cliff hanger and I think for me it would of been good to if the other girl was more involved then she was but overall it's a great read had me at the end of my seat the whole time"

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The Pool Party

"Fucking great story"

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Be careful what you wish for

"They were nt boyfriend and girlfriend but cared about each other to try to respect each others feelings. Why does the guy with the biggest cock have to be the arrogant one? Jack was felt threatened because Peter s well hung. She should start seeing Peter "

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Loved it!! 🔥🥰

"Hope to read more of the story 🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️"

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The Pool Party

"Erotic but not crass. Lovely story telling."

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Awesome

"I really liked the detail of the action and the amount of action.I would recommend this title to friends"

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