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Great story

"I really liked this story, and though I did feel sorry for Maxen at the end I totally understand why Michelle chose Carlos. Michelle is a really inspiring character and I love how she stood up for what SHE wanted even when her mother and brother were against it. There were a few errors in the grammar and sometimes I felt the way the dialogue was constructed was a bit weird (one character speaking twice in a row), but it's normal to make mistakes and the storyline totally makes up for it. "

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Painting Romance

"This is such a sweet book that I wish the parts with Carlos was not rushed. Why is that stories that should be lengthy are not while those that should be short are made unnecessarily lengthy? I loved every bit of it. I love how she knew her worth enough to break it off with Mexan. Would have preferred you add at least 3 or more chapters to it before ending it. Nice one"

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unexpected

"wonderful and unusual plot. <3 Worth the read!"

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Good

"Love the book"

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Painting romance

"I absolutely loved this story, I didn't want to put it down. A great story line and the twist at the end. Thank you"

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Painting Romance

"The twist at the end left me gobsmacked. Nice story🥰🥰🥰"

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Painting romance

"I enjoyed thos book. Keep on writting i love to read yr work"

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Young love to mature love…excellent read

"Loved the story and the main character. A few minor grammatical errors, however very enjoyable and easy read. Especially loved the unexpected ending! Well done, look forward to reading more from this author! "

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Painting romance

"I love how she ended up with Carlos. "

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So good

"This is the best ending for Michelle. Loved the story, had really good morals too. Very spicy scenes😘 overall, it's a wonderful book! Couldn't expect for better, welllllll donnnnnnnnneeeee👊👊👊❤"

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Nice book

"Nice book...I enjoyed reading. Keep writing."

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painting romance

"oh so good. this has to be one of my favorite stories so far. exciting and dramatic with a wonderful surprise ending. thank you s. schiller"

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Pooja

"When do get to read the rest of the story?Can't wait to finish it"

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Good times :)

"It has a good pace and the details are good. There is a focus on conflict beyond just the pair which makes it more real. It does need to be proofread as there are spelling and grammatical errors. I am looking forward to seeing where the story goes!"

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Painting Romance

"Too bad it was too short..Wanted more..Loved the story..Can’t wait for more.💕💕🔥🔥"

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Painting romance

"I enjoyed the plot of the story. Really love Michelle and Maxen's story it broke my hurt when he thought she betrayed him and didn't trust her . Although it was unexpected that she would meet Carlos I am glad she got a happened ending because when you live someone ,there should be trust and without trust why be with someone when you don't trust them . Michelle did what was best for her and made a decision on what makes her happy and am glad .in a way you could say her breakup with Maxen led to a happier ending with Carlos❤️"

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The Ending Sucked.

"The plot was going great until the ending sucker punched me. Just read the entire story of Maxen and Michelle falling in love working their shit out, becoming better people together just for that ending? Frustrating as hellllll. Characters were great (not Carlos) and was fully invested in them but now I kinda feel like it was a waste of time learning about them at all because she gapped so I don’t know. I’m mad."

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Sexy

"Sweet loving couple"

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Painting Romance

"I would really like it if there's a second book but with her and carlos's story and all they had to go through through her pregnancy and I want to hear about the night like from beginning of the story from carlos point of view from seeing her on the plane until she moves their then switch between the two point of views.."

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My love

"Great book!!"

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