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Twist at the End
"Thank you for writing this short narrative. It had an interesting twist at the end. I look forward to reading more of your work."
An interesting read
"I love the PI style and the main character. An enjoyable story with intriguing characters. it was well written, and I hope there will be more stories to read involving Vic Cross and Logan. I liked that their relationship was revealed gradually and wonder if they will ever get back together or work more closely on a case- that would be interesting."
Good story
"Nice short story, I would actually like to hear more about Victoria Cross's cases. I liked the way the author depicted the grey City, the decrepit environement, I enjoyed the overwhelming vibe it gave. "
