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The Alpha's King Mate

"It was a short but well detailed story 👌 "

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Really good short read book.

"This is fast paste with a lot going on so buckle up and strap it for a fast ride. I think you will enjoy this one and thanks to the author for sharing this with all of us."

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Virgie's Take

"Loved the alpha king. He was so humble, earthly and s virgin. He had great integrity. Compliments to his parents and his insights. So glad his queen recovered from her abuse just enough to survive."

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Love the book

"It was a very good book,l loved it and the story..waoh....thank you for this story and I will now start looking for other story under your name."

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Good book

"This book was not bad. I did enjoy it as a quick read. I do like a book that is straightforward without describing everything in minute detail. With that being said, maybe start the time earlier in her life to give more substance to the book, and maybe add details about the other children so we are aware of what the boys suffered through."

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Love love love it!

"I’ve really enjoyed reading your book! The characters were well developed and the storyline was great! Keep up the good work!"

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The alpha King’s mate

"I liked this book, but it was too short. If you would put more details in, you could’ve made the book longer maybe added more about their life at the camp while they were at the camp and how all that progressed. Anyway, it was a good story just really wish it would’ve been longer. I liked the characters. Please keep writing. I’m off to share."

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The Alpha King's Mate

"Great story. Short story, but had everything in it!"

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Wonderful short story!

"Loved this little story! Very good job getting all of that into a short story and not leaving loose ends. "

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The Alpha King's Mate

"I loved loved loved this story!! A*use and violence warnings here, but definitely worth the read if you can deal with some very descriptive scenes and mentions of such. Zara didn't have an easy childhood, a human growing up in a rogue camp ruled with a werewolf with an iron fist. What happens when other werewolves free the camp? Well, you'll just have to read the story! Another amazing story from the author! I'm looking forward to (hopefully) future books from them. Some spelling and grammar errors, but not like the earlier ones. Excellent job!"

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Love this

"I discovered this author today and have already read two stories from them. There is some issue with grammar in places. It is, however, far outweighed by the wonderful storyline and the way the author tells the story. Can't wait for more !"

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destiny

"lovely story"

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The alpha king 's mate

"Wow!! What an adventure!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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The Alpha Kings Mate

"Lovely story. The queen really showed lots of growth from where she started. Her husband was a wonderful support for her. Lots of ups and downs for her but she got through it stronger than ever. A real power couple as they say. A very exciting short story. Loved everything about it. Thank you author."

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The Alpha King's Mate

"Love the short story..."

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Well done

"Very thrilling was on edge alot waiting to see what happened next "

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Sucked me in

"Sucked me right in the first chapter is an amazing read beautifully written"

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The Alpha Kings Mate

"Loved it. So so sweet. Good story!!!"

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Love

"This was very well written lived it very much "

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Awesome!!

"Great storyline! I really enjoyed your book"

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