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Life in a Utopia was meant to be perfect but there is always a group of people hurting. And in this Utopia it was the females and poor people. Mercy was a little girl when her parents abandoned her twin, her younger sister and her. They were left with a maid who quit when the twins turned sixteen. Her twin brother Sincere started to provided as Mercy and her younger sister Heaven were sent to school. One day when Mercy was out dealing with male suitors, Sincere and Heaven gets killed. When Mercy gets home she calls the cops and the cops didn't look for the murderer. Mercy seeks out the killer and when she finds out that he was murdered the cops turned to say that Mercy murdered him. She is arrested where she meets the sheriff's son Hunter. The two interacts until they fall in love, they escape and start building an army of poor people to take down the rich people who run the Utopia.
Mercy fell to her knees grabbing Hunter's head. She cradled his head in her laps as blood soaked his shirt.
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Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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ILoveBooks: Excellent read! Strong characters. Engaging and captivating gently. Love love love this story. Thank you.
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Bargara4670: This is a real feel-good love story. I enjoyed it very much. I'll certainly read more by this author.
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Gallandro7: I originally added this because it looked interesting and I was curious how the mate process would go. I almost removed it due to several other books ahead of it, but I took an afternoon and read the entire thing in one go.I was pleasantly surprised at how well the book was crafted and that the mate...
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barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama
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Jeanne: A lovely story without endless drama. Just 2 people finding each other. Truly enjoyable. Goal achieved! Thank you.
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Veekay186: I really like the storyline and will recommend it for a relaxing read. It shows love is a sweet light.
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