Mercy by Crya Lullaby at Inkitt
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Mercy

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Summary

Life in a Utopia was meant to be perfect but there is always a group of people hurting. And in this Utopia it was the females and poor people. Mercy was a little girl when her parents abandoned her twin, her younger sister and her. They were left with a maid who quit when the twins turned sixteen. Her twin brother Sincere started to provided as Mercy and her younger sister Heaven were sent to school. One day when Mercy was out dealing with male suitors, Sincere and Heaven gets killed. When Mercy gets home she calls the cops and the cops didn't look for the murderer. Mercy seeks out the killer and when she finds out that he was murdered the cops turned to say that Mercy murdered him. She is arrested where she meets the sheriff's son Hunter. The two interacts until they fall in love, they escape and start building an army of poor people to take down the rich people who run the Utopia.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Mercy fell to her knees grabbing Hunter's head. She cradled his head in her laps as blood soaked his shirt.


"Please no! Hunter I can't lose you too!" Mercy cried as she held his head tighter.

His breathing fell into a slow labored pattern as the bloody war rage around them. Two medics ran over to check on Hunter, with Mercy's help they carried Hunter to the underground base.
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1. Prologue
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I really enjoyed the mood and depth in your story, it paints such vivid imagery.
It made me think how powerful it could be as a visual piece or c0mic.
I’m involved in visual storytelling, and your work caught my attention.
Let me know if you’d like to connect.

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