Chapter 1 The Dungeon
I have been thinking about my sweet submissive Kiara; treating her to a trip to the Dungeon Club in New Orleans. It doesn’t open until 10 p.m., so we spent the afternoon relaxing in my New Orleans condo and even took a nap together. Even though Jared and Kiara wanted it, we didn’t make love, expecting that abstinence would increase the sexual tension when we got to the club. When Jared and Kiara arrive at the Dungeon Club, a darkened room with a bar at one end. Jared and Kiara are older than the usual crowd, and we are a mixed-race couple. Jared and Kiara enjoyed the attention; feeling completely anonymous. No one knows or cares who we are; just visiting the establishment for pleasure; knowing that we will see none of these people again. It’s a nice way to be” public” but completely secure. My beautiful submissive Kiara is wearing stockings and high heels. They show off her legs and feet-the shoes seem to say “fuck me”. Her leather skirt is very short, and she has no panties on. Her top is snug and shows off her beautiful breasts. If one were to look carefully, one might see the dark outline of her large sexy hard nipples sure through her clothes. Jared's mouth is hungry for her nipples as they harden when I suck them. Jared pulled her hair back; gave my baby a prominent necklace to wear-almost a collar that is purple and gold, the crowd will see it as a sign that she belongs to Jared. She is strong and proud, and there is no doubt she belongs to Jared. Kiara and Jared love the feeling of belonging, loving, and respecting each other.
As Jared and Kiara entered the club and found a table. It is dark, music playing low in the background on a poorly lit stage. At some intervals, two or more people will wander onto the stage and ” perform”. It may be a couple or a small group, but people do things that are natural to them, sex acts, punishment, or bondage as pleases them and the viewers. Jared and Kiara do not focus on the people in the dungeon, but they enjoy getting new ideas from what people do explicitly on stage. Kiara knows her turn will come on stage and she is wondering what it will feel like. The sounds of bondage and submission drift through the room from the stage. Jared and Kiara dance a slow dance at one point. She feels natural in my arms and I caress her body. She knows some people are looking at her short skirt. Her bare bottom is showing slightly, but no one can tell if she is wearing a thong or anything at all. The dark space between her beautiful legs is invisible, mysterious, and attractive. The tops of her stockings are sexy and hot. Kiara is dripping wet after Jared kissed Kiara a long time on the dance floor. Kiara's glistening wetness ran down her thighs from her luscious pussy along the inside of her thigh. I led her back to the table and sat down as she stood beside me. With a black napkin, I wipe the silky wetness from inside her thigh as she stands proudly with her legs apart. Jared's hand disappeared under her skirt, and everyone who was watching wondered what I felt. I only felt even more beautiful, enticing wetness and heat in my lover’s cunt. It is almost time to be onstage. Kiara is sitting across from me at the table. Kiara crosses her legs carefully to allow Jared to see her soft warm thighs and peek up at her shaved and moist pussy. No one else can see, and she takes great pride in letting only her man look. Several Dommes in the room have sent over their subs to offer me a “trade”. It’s clear that one woman wants desperately to be topped by my submissive Kiara. I politely tell them no and thank their mistresses. One freelance sub who is rude and pushy asks to join us in a backroom for some “fun”. I told her she should be so lucky as to lick my jizz from Kiara’s ass after I had pleasured myself there and emptied my balls into that delicious dark love hole. Kiara blushes, and the sub finally knows she has pushed too far. I can tell she is ready to say yes even to my put-down before she sulks away. Kiara smiles, and I look at the bottom bitch in her eyes as she looks away. There is a lull on stage, and it is our chance. I led Kiara to the side and up to one or two steps and onto the small stage. It is quite dark and the small lights make it quite impossible to see anyone. Kiara is nervous and Jared understands how Kiara needs to trust her man as she walks confident and sexy.
Jared instructed her to lean over a chair with her profile to the audience. Jared lifted her short tight skirt and showed her smooth, strong bottom. Kiara instinctively places her feet apart as Jared caresses Kiara's bottom, following low to the back wetness of her pussy, silky and hot. His caress turns to a sharp slap, catching her a little by surprise, and she cries out. Good, Jared thinks - the spanking will soon make a little river of juice flow from her cunt. Jared has brought a crop with him, knowing it is Kiara’s favorite.
The sharp sting of the slap and the first pain of the crop turns quickly into warmth and pleasure for Kiara. Kiara relaxes under the familiar feelings and then there is only her desire to please, and growing arousal as Jared plays with her beautiful body. She pushes her cunt out to receive the firm taps that she knows will bring her to completion. Jared toys with her as the audience watches silently, but there will be no cumming yet for my slut. Someone whispers that she wants that - not clear if it’s Kiara’s gorgeous wet cunt, Jared’s role, or to be handled so expertly. The audience can barely hear us on stage - the microphones are low, transmitting Kiara’s whispers and my coaching. Jared refuses to let Kiara climax, taking her only to the very edge. Jared can hear Kiara's husky voice begging to cum, but Jared knows his work and does not allow it. At one point, she secretly moans “daddy”. I am not persuaded to release his bitch. She is so lost in her desire and sexuality that the whole room disappears. Her dark eyes and body beg to be released. Jared has better plans for his perfect cunt. When Kiara is ready, Jared sits on the edge of the chair and motions for Kiara to kneel in front. Panting and dripping with desire, she takes his hard cock from his pants, kneeling on a soft cushion, legs apart. Kiara pleases her man’s eyes up at him, knowing she secretly loves his power and ability to hold her to her discipline. Jared is very hard from the pleasure of his slut. She tastes almonds and his silky wetness. Kiara loves his precum and milks Jared’s cock for more of it. Begging Jared to honor her skill with his cum. Jared whispers to her, coaching and teasing. Kiara knows from the feel of his cock that he belongs to her. Kiara is proud and strong feeling Jared's spasms begin and sucks the bulging head extra hard, letting Jared know her spirit. The delicious jizz flows in spurts into her mouth. Kiara swallows, being sure to let only Jared see the cream and pleasure with which she receives it. Like a good slut, Kiara shows Jared her clean mouth when she is done....while the murmurs in the crowd reveal their true pleasure and admiration for both Kiara and Jared. Kiara leans up and gives Jared a final cummy kiss, letting him taste and feel her long tongue. Jared whispers “good girl” to his woman.
As expected, the audience really does not dwell on the scene. Jared leads his precious submissive across the room to a dark hallway in the back of the club. On the left is a small room with an open doorway covered in beads. Only a sofa is inside and it is very dark. Jared leads Kiara inside, turns her, and slides her skirt up again and he helps her sit. Her legs fall apart, and now the scene is reversed as Jared kneels between Kiara’s thighs for his dessert. She is hot, creamy, wet, and delicious. Jared opens her cunt with his fingers as his tongue finds her erect clit. She is ready - leaning back and pushing her cunt up to the pleasure of her man. Jared fingers her pussy, and slides into her tight ass as well. Lifting his hand, he sucks her delicious engorged clit as Kiara explodes in a flood of cum and juices. Jared licks and satisfies his desires while Kiara’s spasms slowly subside. Quickly, he helps her up, slides her skirt down, and leads his cunt back to their table. She is wet and panting when they sit. They are the only ones certain what took place in the back room. Kiara is the perfect submissive for Jared as she complies with pride and pleasure.









The concept is great. I noticed that you change from 1st POV (point of view) to 3rd POV in the first paragraph.