What is your opinion?
Beautifully written and very hot
"She has always been very gifted, as a writer and more!"
So much pleasure
"I reread the chapters often. The author really knows the detail of pleasure, it is impossible not to play along and drain your balls time and time again"
Younger Memories Revisited
"Hello tgrmaine & all other readers... This short story writing provides the reader of past times of satisfaction, desire, lust, fulfillment, with anticipation for the next round soon... It evoked memories of my younger past when I too envisioned a submission woman that would & could be so seductive, both passively & very expressive... Tried to put a "voice" to the chapters.. still striving to make it work. Looking forward to when another short story comes out, to read and enjoy it fully. and practicing to do better at "slow reading" to help intensive the action before me.... Keep writing as for 1 do get excited reading such sexy day/night activities. It's a "double thumbs UP" read."
Interesting
"Appears different from the usual. Plots are interesting. Attention to detail is also pretty amusing. All in all the story is entertaining. Thank you for writing this."
His Beautiful Submissive
"Hello everyone, This is the first story I have posted on the site. After reading countless stories and writing some short stories. I am currently taking a creative writing class to improve my writing skills. I have decided to write a story. Please give a like or a review telling me what you think. I would love for ppl to read it and give me your honest opinion. So please help inspiring writer out."
