What is your opinion?
, Bella
"'l loved this it was amazing all the caricatures were hot and it was a very suspenseful sifff spicy book I loud it there are sun types in their so check though but overall it was a vey good book to read I fed Th carters"
The story is very good
"It is a very nice story. The content and all the thing is nice. I will definitely recommend my friends to read this novel "
Book
"It's a really good book I really enjoy reading it I'm very happy with it whoever wrote it did a really good job way to go"
I like
"I really enjoyed this book. The characters were likable although there were avfew loose wnds with all other characters disappering without any info. Just needs a bit of editing but a good story nonetheless "
Bella
"Love the story ❤"
Bella
"It was a good story but also felt rushed to end it. I felt there could have or should have been more. But still not bad."
Bella
"Very good story he was from teenagers to adulthood he became a very good person even though what type of business he was doing but it was all detail-oriented and I enjoyed reading it thank you to the author of this book and I hope there's more books"
It was Ok
"The store was okay he had a lot of grammar errors. But overall the story wasn't too bad."
Bella
"Romantic story"
Bella
"It was good I could tell that you might be a younger author by how you wrote this story I could tell that you also had a plot and got excited and moved on too quickly but 8/10 "
Bella
"Love the story ❤️❤️❤️"
Bella
"I liked the whole story. But the chapters are too short"
Ok ok
"Simple and good"
My world
"Ok quick read "
Good for a first try
"English is not your first language,that's pretty obvious. While some grammar mistakes are expected, sometimes it is a little too much. Also, please take a look at some technical writing instructions. In that aspect, you need a little more improvement. Regarding the plot, I feel like the beginning is well spread, but the middle and the ending is rushed. You could you a little longer description of each milestone of the timeline. You could also use a little more details. Keep up with the good work!"
Bella
" I dislike that it run so fastt skipping large timelines."
Bella
"Book needs a good editor - too many spelling and grammar mistakes. Timelines need work too - story tends to jump months and years ahead. Dialogue between the 2 main chatacters quite. Wish main girl had a bit more of a steely backbone."
