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A Twin's Redemption

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Summary

A blue book can change the whole world within a second. After discovering a dramatic secret from a little blue book, two red headed twins -Mildred and Angelica- embark on an adventure to find redemption, love and freedom. Their lives are based in a prison inside of their own home. Their parents do not care. There are bullies everywhere. Will these twins be able to save each other and others from such a terrible magical madness?

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Complete
Chapters
30
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

The Beginning- Mildred

It was our first day of kindergarten. I clutched my sister Angelica’s hand, squeezing it tightly. She was gripping mine even harder. My sister and I were not your typical four year olds. We believed that we had the brains of a tenth grade kid – well, maybe not in book learning, but life had taught us a lot.

All the kids were in the classroom with their parents. The students all looked so weird. It was as if they had all met before today. They were waving and smiling at each other and were shouting out to the others what they had done with each other before they started school. The parents and children stood in multiple small groups, laughing and hugging each other. We were outcasts, standing there by ourselves in an open space. To tell you the truth, this is what my sister Angelica and I felt all the time at home. Our parents had simply just dropped us off at the school gates this morning, lured us to the office by our hands and bags, and then left without saying goodbye.

“Good morning, children and parents,” Miss Vlanet said. “Today, you will start school, and you have to let your parents go.”

The children began to cry as soon as Miss Vlanet finished. Other four year olds ran to grab their parents as they tried to back out the classroom door. Angelica and I just stood there. We were fine. We had each other. And what could be so wrong about school? All of these kids must have loved their parents a lot. But my sister and I were the exact opposite.

“Children, gather around, please,” Miss Vlanet said soon after the children’s parents left. “We need to start.” We all sat in a circle facing the teacher. I do this a lot when I am watching TV at home with my sister.

“We will start by getting to know each other. Who would like to begin?” she said.

Even though Miss Vlanet had a weird name that sounded ghastly, my first impression of her was that she was an excellent person. She was tall and had long, curly hair. A bit like mine, actually, but my hair was red. Hers was blonde.

“Miss, I’m John and I like the toilet,” a dark-haired boy said, sticking up his hand.

Miss Vlanet blinked. “How rude of you to say that. If you do that again, you will go to the naughty corner.”

She pointed to a corner. There was a mat, surrounded by shelves with books that were easy for us children to read. It didn’t look that bad over there. I would love to read a book. I might be able to find out more about my parents and why they do certain things.

“I’m Mildred and this is my twin sister, Angelica,” I said.

“Well, hello, Mildred and Angelica. Pleased to meet you.”

“You too, Miss,” I said.

The whole class had a chance to say something about themselves. Many of the boys were naughty and childish. The girls were polite. It took a long time for all the kids to introduce themselves. By the time it was over, I knew who to make friends with and who not to. Not the boys: I’m too calm for them. Most of the girls seemed fine; others had significantly large problems. They were complaining about their looks and what they should and shouldn’t eat for most of the time when Miss Vlanet was trying to talk. Was I going to survive here? I didn’t like when people talked about their looks and food habits. I wonder what would happen if they compared their lives to mine?

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