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Notice Me

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Summary

I didn't notice him at first, but when I finally did, that's the moment I regretted it.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Jason's POV:


From the other side of the room, nearly 2 inches away from the classroom window, I watched as her plump pink lips parted itself into a big bright smile. Her shiny white teeth added a cute spark to her pale white skin and her lower left dimple emerged slowly onto her chubby red cheeks. Her long dark hair swayed with the passing wind, revealing a tiny beauty spot beside her right eye. She was really pretty......beautifully made to be exact. It was just her personality.... Her personality alone turns me off.


She was surrounded by a bunch of guys, not even daring to look in my direction..... I'm pretty sure I was nothing to her, non-existent, invisible. And yet, I strongly crave her attention....just for her to notice me....even once....just one glimpse. For the past few weeks, I've been studying her.....observing her every move and tiny, unnoticeable actions. She was kinda like those types.


Those girls who would do anything for boys attention, her pretty looks alone wouldn't make her attractive; well at least to some people it won't, but there was also something about her, that made her appear even more good looking, it wasn't her personality..... Cause based on my observations her personality wasn't as pretty as her looks.. I think it's the way she carries herself........ Like how she plays so hard to get even though countless amount of guys wants her.....or how she acts so innocent knowing that she's the exact opposite of that.


She's really fishy and there's something about her that really pulls me in. Just as I was about to turn my head to the front, the sound of the bell ringing triggered my body to jolt. "OKAY GUYS SEE YOU ALL NEXT WEEK AND REMEMBER TO REVISE FOR THE TEST ON MONDAY!!" My English teacher yelled from in front of her desk. I wasn't even listening to her basically the whole class period. I was so mesmerized by that girls beauty that I forget that class was in session.


I arose from my desk and began packing my school bag. I said my goodbyes to my teacher and exit the classroom. My head was already stinging, and those annoying kids screaming in the hallway progressively made it worse. It was currently Friday which means no more school until Monday, I was happy to go home but at the same time I wasn't. I made my way out of the school and trudged my way over towards the bus stop next to the school.


I sighed heavily and walked towards the seat, hoping that this bus can come so I can finally go home and enjoy my slumber. I sat at the seat and rested my head on the giant board placed behind me. All I needed is some peace and quiet..... To go to a place filled with silence and tranquility. This place is too loud for me.....too violent.....too noisy.


The sound of the bus honking enforced me to emerge from my seat. I got up immediately and raced to where the bus is supposed to pick us up. Surprisingly, I got there in time, and no-one else was there to barge into the bus. I backed up from where I was standing so that it could pull in. I greeted the bus driver good afternoon and walked my way onto the bus. I then took a seat at the front where I would always sit.


It wasn't long before people started swarming in....Well there goes my peace. It took less than 15 people for the bus to reek and in my case, there were over 45 people on that bus, including the 3 sitting beside me. I rotated my head to the left facing toward the window and gazed outside.


I observed as the children caught rides with there friends and some began walking home........The girl whom I was gazing at earlier was overcrowded with boys who wouldn't even give her space to breathe.... But of course, she liked it...the attention..... All eyes being on her... that's what she liked..... the bus started to move and bump over the many pot holes that stayed round on the road. I was excited to go home and play with my cat- mr.whiskers. It didn't take long for me to start feeling drowsy.....resulting in the sleepiness of my eyes and my mouth yawning in exhaustion.


I took one last glimpse outside to see where I was and based on what I could see, I was no where close my home, so I closed my eyes and welcomed the darkness that took me away, Hoping when I go home things would get better.


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