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The bustard alpha

"I don't like the egotistical and egomaniac of the alpha king. At least could have portrayed him better. Wish he was dead. The novel is better without him. "

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Super

"Die Story ist wirklich interessant und gut. Ich liebe solche Storys."

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It's an interesting story ....I like the plot of the story the author has done a great job. I love reading stories of this particular author 😃

"I like this fantasy story very much.... it's an interesting story....i love all the stories of this particular author. The plot and characterization of this story is amazing...i looking forward to more of such stories."

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Good read

"Even though I only got to read 5 chapters it’s good so far "

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The rejected luna is ight

"I think it sounds rushed and exaggerated..The idea so far is ok but it sounds Generic like u could tell how it may end before you finish reading. "

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😞 🤨

"This is like it’s written by a completely different person from the first book. The grammar is terrible and sounds like a kid . I hate how Richard hasn’t gotten humbled yet. Two books in and there is not much happy. "

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Rejected luna

"This is starting to make me angry why can't we read the whole thing "

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