Chapter 1
This is an original story. Names and characters are all fiction. This story is copy righted and under editing. This is my first story so please comment to help me. I hope you enjoy.
Amelia’s POV: My sister was the greatest big
sister in the world. She was beautiful, smart,
funny, caring, and a kick-ass fighter. She was
5’8’’ with caramel colored skin that glowed in
the sun. She also had the prettiest eyes and they
were green with gold and red flakes noted in
them. The red in a wolf’s eye had not been seen
in several centuries and she wore contacts to
cover the red when she was around other people
and at school. She got really good grades in high
school and will even graduate early if she keeps
taking the extra classes in the summer like she
has been doing for the past 2 years. I was
grateful to have her because without her I would
either be dead or dead. It wasn’t that I was a bad
kid or even disrespectful but once our mom died
that was when things got bad for us.
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I'm loving the concept already, editing is needed but that's just a part of writing. I read my stories everyday and I'm always finding errors in it ugh 😑 😒 But I added it to my library and I'm looking forward to the next chapter gurl! Keep up the good work 👏 🙌 👍
I love different! ❤
Nice starting. ❤️
But the chapter is too short and need a little bit editing. I am sure you are planning to edit it once you finish the story but a little bit of advice... a reader will only proceed to read if she/he likes atleast first 3 chapters in your story. Only if they like the start, they will give a chance to your story. So try to polish the first few chapter before continuing further.