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Out of mind, into emotions

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Summary

Poems and short thoughts about some fictional characters that make me think about their actions and emotions.

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

It Hurts (Loki Laufeyson)





~ it hurts doesn't it, Loki?

it hurts to see one of the only people who truly loved you taken away from you.

it hurts to feel powerless in the face of such a situation.

it hurts couldn't call her when you need advice.

it hurts couldn't hug her and feel her perfume.

it hurts you are not there to protect her.

but, even in the midst of so much pain
she will still be guiding
and help you will the end.

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I really enjoyed the mood and depth in your story, it paints such vivid imagery.
It made me think how powerful it could be as a visual piece or c0mic.
I’m involved in visual storytelling, and your work caught my attention.
Let me know if you’d like to connect.

4 months

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