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Interesting

"Excited to see where the story line goes and what happens with the characters"

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Torn

"I love everything about this book I will recommend it to everyone I know."

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Loved it!

"It was amazing! A lot of action in the chapters"

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Tracey

"Brilliant story I love the brothers can’t wait to read more "

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Family aint blood

"My first adult smut book and I'm hooked "

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Family ain't blood

"I liked the book. Congratulations to the author!"

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Family ain’t blood

"Enjoyed reading this what is the next book called "

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Best book ever!!!!

"I can’t wait to read more, it’s an intriguing story line. Great job!!!!!!!! "

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Family ain't blood

"Great story!! Love the protectiveness, love and the sex scenes were AWESOME!!!! Typos and phrasing.....but figured out the correct ones . "

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Liked it

"Very good smut 🔥🔥🔥"

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It's good book to read and good for everyone who wants to read

"Hhhh good good "

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Ybffhk

"Good as it is"

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?????

"😕😕😕😕😕"

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Family aint blood

"Some frases are incorrect. Some spelling and grammar incorrect. It is a good story line. Able to follow quite easily. Like the Characters and the description of their strenght and weaknesses. Author must keep track when describing clothing items eg Amelia is wearing a skirt then she pulls her pants up. The meeting with Maritza at the bar, first it was quiet then there was a gaggle of ladies then there was music. Set the scene and pay attention to what you would like to portray. Paint the picture and colour it in for the reader to grab and hold their attention. Looks like English is not the Authors first language. Being able to describe and have a good story line is rather impressive. Well done. Will keep an eye out for your other work"

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Pha

"Okay okay okay nice nice nice just nice"

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