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Autumn Evening

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Summary

an autumn evening

Genre
Poetry,Other
Author
Olivia
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

1


The crisp, cold air

didn’t hesitate to freeze my lungs,

as I breathe in

and sigh.


From the base of the tree,

everything seemed golden,

from the ground

to the sky.


A soft breeze

starts the song of the trees

as their saturated leaves

tremble.


I close my eyes

as the sun warms

my colorless skin.


Another breeze follows, gently pulling my hair,

giving motion

to my long, brown waves

like an ocean.


It died down

and I open my eyes.

The sky painted itself red,

blood dripping down from the heavens.


Cold seeps into my bones,

as the sun says goodbye.

And though I do not want to leave,

I know I’ll be back another time.




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