Inkitt
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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect: flemingmichelle28"

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I like the title

"Interesting "

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Interesting novel

"Beautifully written novel and amazing story line💕💕"

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Love it

"Love this book 😍"

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Amalia Ferrari

"This story is so good, I love mafia stories especially when the leader is mafia woman. Amalia’s relationship with Alessandro is perfection and their relationship with Lily is so pure"

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Abt details

"Well I loved your story so much it was good....but I want to just advice that you can pay a little more concern on the details.....I know it doesn't bother much....but I like some detailing in the chapters.....it make it feel more realistic......"

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Love it

"I love your writing skills and the grammars "

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Good

"This was very good story thank you for sharing."

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