Unique & Unexpected

"This story is really unique. Becca and Jim are both really dynamic characters, and I found myself wondering what was going to happen next as the plot goes along. The story has some great imagery and is filled with unexpected twists and turns that made you keep reading. There were a couple things I'd recommend for the author to possibly make the dialogue sound a little more casual, but other than that, it was a great story! **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR IN THE COMMENTS."