Wow! Well written!

"I can't wait to see what happens next! This has some real life experience to it."

Breath of Fresh Air

"Simply amazing story... loved it very much 😊"

Very Good. Could not put it down.

"Has some grammatical errors, but story is addictive and great. "

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"Breath of Fresh Air"

"good story, reliving the years of high school, relationships good, bad or indifferent. Ashford, or Ash, meets Brook, then leaves the town, meets with some bad dudes, winds up in jail, posts bail and knows he has to leave town before the bad dudes find him. Ash is concerned about his mother, as he returns to the city of his high school friends, Brook and his past girl friend Alisha. The Story flows beautifully, and the plot thickens. A few suggestions if I may. You might think of proof reading your story, by reading it outloud to yourself, which I do too, to catch the spelling errors, grammar issues and punctuation. You are a good writer, easy to read your work as it flows smoothly. a little work on the technical stuff will get you into the "Perfect genre of Writers." Good story, well plotted.............. william elliott kern...."

It's good

"Surprisingly good, after all the disappointing readings from this site "