What is your opinion?
Wow
"Loved the book.. Pls write more mysteries like this"
Snakes & Ladders
"Let me just start off by saying that this is a phenomenal story you have here. I love the way you've taken a mindless board game and seamlessly transformed it into something so sinister. The writing keeps me on edge and each chapter ends with a suspense that leaves me wanting more. The characters are well-developed, and their dialogue is believable and realistic. It's almost as if I'm there, watching it all unfold. The story is slow-going, giving the suspense time to heighten and become almost unbearable. Extremely well done. There are a few grammatical mistakes scattered here and there: a few words misspelled (clearly typos, as you spelled them correctly later), and some run-on sentences. But those are easily fixed. Honestly, all you really need to do for this story is give it a proofread. That's it. I have no negative thoughts. I wish you success with this story; I really think you can go somewhere with this! I certainly enjoyed it."
Snakes and ladders
"I a? Enjoying this story. It puts a new spin on senseless killings. It is getting better because the ends are meeting. "
