Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

Okay, not a nice ending

"Well didn't expect it to drop off like that but I will definitely keep reading. Good story so far. Good authorr."

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Super fun

"I like the plot twist and that am so exited to read the rest i really like the story and like evry ting about it "

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Super fun

"I like the plot twist and that am so exited to read the rest i really like the story and like evry ting about it "

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Amazing I hav. No words I loved it please continue it :)

"I loved it it was asome really I would love if you made more of this series ❤️"

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Nice work

"I loved how the story is what I dislike that I can't read further. I really loved how it turned on. I am totally in love with this novel "

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Lonely @405

"Good story interesting characters"

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My gay jock boyfriend

"Its a sexy suspenseful story. I like how the mystery boyfriend is teasing jax. "

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Nice job

"Nice job in keeping everyone hooked "

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My gay jock boyfriend

"I loved the book"

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Idk

"CLIFFHANGER 😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤"

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My gay jock boyfriend

"I really like this book - I like how in it it makes the jock seem kind and happy and gay and comfortable around Jax "

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I love this book

"Are you kidding. I just read a book that doesn't have a ended. this book was so good. Please continue."

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It's amazing but you have a few mistakes

"There are a few mistakes here and there but all is good"

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monster

"You torment your readers and expect us to like the book. While I did you better keep writing and explain yourself. I need to know. Please I beg of you to complete the book and at least tell me the name of the person who followed the main character. PLEASE"

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Great book

"It puts me on the edge of my seat in Excitment"

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Great!

"The book is flowing nicely so far can’t wait to see how it works out 💕"

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Thoughts 💭

"I love it! In my opinion this story is amazing and well done! ❤"

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Lol

"This story is A-MA-ZING I can't put it in words so all I can really say is it is amazing, spectacular, fabulous hope you right more stories like this"

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I liked that the story was about bi guys /I would recommend this to my best friend/I picked it because I want to haveanal sex with a younger guy

"I like that the story is about closet gay boys and would recommend it to my friend and I want to get fucked by a guy"

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My gay jock boyfriend

"It's one of those novels which ends in a question. The writer must've thought that it would be a good thing but to me it wasn't. Felt a lot disappointed.."

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