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Ramadan

" The writing itself is solid, with a decent flow and engaging prose, but from an Islamic perspective, it falls short in several ways. There’s little effort to explain key cultural or religious elements, making it difficult for readers unfamiliar with Islam to fully grasp the significance of certain moments. The descriptions lack vividness, making it hard to immerse oneself in the setting, and I would have liked to see more translations of phrases instead of assuming the reader already understands them. Most importantly, the values of Ramadan self-discipline, spiritual struggle, and personal growth are barely explored in depth, making the story feel more like a surface-level depiction rather than an authentic, introspective journey. Nonetheless less I see great potential in the writer and for a part two. The cover art is decent enough and I can even make it out with my sight issues. River L. De Clairmont. "

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Amazing

"Damn please update soon "

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