Inkitt
Back to Story

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Good potential!

"Over all it wasn’t a bed story but the chapters were too short and there were a few plot holds. Also how in the heck did yo come up with a girl if orange hair! It’s geniuses and totally a book I would read but again is was a little short. Really good for your first story!!"

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