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The forbidden love

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Summary

A earth girl and a Zodan boy fall in love. Should they be together or die of shame?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The beginning

Stella’s POV


I’m on my way home from work when I see a pair of eyes watching my every movement. As I get closer to my house, I see the mysterious man come out from his hiding place and man he was handsome. He had broad shoulders and stern look on his face.


“You… thing your coming with me now.” He said

“No I’m not and you can’t make me.” I replied quickly

“Yes you are”

“No I’m not”

Without another word, he grabbed me and threw me over his shoulder like I was nothing.

“Hey! Put me down now!” I screamed and kicked but he didn’t budge

After a few hours I calmed down when he put me on this bed with soft blankets on it.

“You will meet my eyes, you will stay with me til I assign you a tent of your own do you understand?” He said looking at me

I replied quickly “yes General”

“Please don’t call me General when we’re alone call me Jasper but when we’re out in public call me General.”

“Yes Jasper” I said as I tilted me head sideways

He left for his job and I just sat on his bed til he returned.

Hours later he came back.

“Hello.” I greeted him

“Greetings” he said as he walked to his tub

He undressed in front of me and I looked away quickly

He chuckled and said” Don’t be surprised I know you’ve seen men undress before”

I’m embarrassed as I say I’m protest “For your information that was my brother and I had to bathe him because he had a mental disability”

“Had?” He asked

I look away “My brothers dead. He died in car crash along with my parents” holding back tears I look up at him

“Oh. I didn’t know I’m sorry.” He had sympathy

“It’s not your fault.”

“I will hug you now.” He said as he came closer to me

I let hug me for a few minutes before he let go

“Anyway, what is this place?” I asked looking around

“This place is a planet called Zodan and this is my home.” He replies with a stern look

I hope I fit in on this new planet
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1. The beginning
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