What is your opinion?
It does its job
"It is a very interesting story, it's not my type but it is pretty well written. It was a bit confusing but only because I'm not into how the story is told. However i think those who enjoy this genre will find something here. Good work and luck."
Interesting!
""Renegade: Retaliation" was a really interesting story with a plot that kept me engaged. I loved the varying shifts of character using first person perspective. Out of all of the characters, I think my favorite had to be Marckus' perspective because he had a lot of interesting insights and seemed relatable to readers. There are several ways the story can be edited to improve clarity and punctuation. I'll put my suggestions for the author below. :) Overall, I thought this story has great potential to become a future sci-fi novel and I can't wait to see what else the author has in store. **NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR IN THE COMMENTS."
