Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Don't knock it til you try it!!
"It can get confusing, but it's really good if you're able to keep up 🥹"
Good read
"Very good read, needs more chapters. "
The Rogue Alpha.
"I love the idea of your story and all of the twists and turns you have included. I'd love to read the completed novel. A few things that need to be dealt with are some spelling errors and misplaced use of words. Also whole paragraphs have been repeated. These helped slow the reading fluidity for me but editing will hopefully correct that. Overall well done. The idea is great I would suggest a breakdown of packs and names somewhere in your novel as otherwise some things may be confusing. "
The Rouge Alfa
"I just liked IT alot."
