What is your opinion?
Book
"Omg amazing I wanna know the rest of the story like right now the tension is killing me"
Cute
"The plot is cute, but the weird paragraphs make it hard to read. I love your descriptions at the beggining, and while it is a short story I thought that the party could've used some more, as to make it more belivable and realistic. Keep going, I liked it!"