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What is your opinion?
Wow!
"I’m at chapter twenty-two. I really like your story! "
First Teutonic Queen
"From a village to an empire with unique opportunities to build said empire was interesting. I can appreciate how you brought the concept to life. The utopian slant, although unrealistic, helps the story progress with speed. The relevance and purpose to the focus on hereditary succession was lost to me though. I will also mention that your ideas on defense measures for the village settlement were well designed. It was worth spending a couple of hours to read the story. Thank you for the read and your effort in writing the story. "
