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Love it ❤

"Epic! So intense! "

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Sins of Eden

"A great read. This story could easily descend into being too bleak to keep reading but author manages to write little bits of hope so we can bear our heartbreak for Maeve."

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Patiently waiting Ig

"Words cannot express how much I love this story, the into and everything keeps me in my toes, not knowing anything in the very beginning made it all better, as I turn pages, as the story pieces fits more in more into a world the author wants to convey, it’s a story where you know how the character truly feels yet at the same time I do not know what they would do with those feelings, how they would act on those feelings, which makes me want to read more."

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A uniquely amazing experimental masterpiece.

"It's my first time that I stumbled upon a psychological romance that is also historical and not contemporary or modern on a western platform like inkitt. And I am happy to see that this story is making it big and is popular among audience. Stories like this have been written before online by many talented authors from Asian countries. . . . But sadly they never came to names in the western platforms. This story is intense. To much imagination that lingers and runs the gears in my brain. The writing style is very compact - the author believes in the policy 'less words say more' in this novel. The background setting is captivating and beautiful to imagine with its historical palaces and mythological elements, and the subtle abnormalities in human nature and vile acts have been used as capable instruments to drive the story. Their is no rush, the story is treading quite calmly.......But I am sure that soon something so big will happen that it will snatch away the land off of our feet. Magnificent!"

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The Sins of Eden

"There is a mystery and intrigue at the essence of the story. It claws onto you. It leaves you hanging onto each word. The characters are vile and wicked (save for Maeve) and yet utterly captivating. I find myself constantly dreaming of and spilling my thoughts about this story. As a writer myself, I am quick to decide whether I respect a story or not. In addition, only ONE story has managed to enthrall me in my entire life and so for Sins of Eden to become the second enthralling story is mind boggling. Big love. "

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Sins of Eden. Just poison her brother.

"Just poison the Brother. Nobody cares if he dies. So the plot is pointless."

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